Here's our new ending to the story...
Stunned by their reaction, Alex stumbled forward and
squatted beside the kid in the red sweatshirt. Gently, he tapped on the kid's
shoulder. As the kid turned and faced Alex they both suddenly froze. Alex
screamed the most blood curdling scream he had ever screamed. The kids face was
covered in...
The kids face was covered in a shiny metallic silver film.
Alex hesitated, unable to move, his hands and feet tied by invisible ropes. He
peered around desperately but the street was deserted. There was no one. As
Alex looked back to the boy he saw his own reflection. An identical picture of
himself, but not. This boy was Alex, but wasn't. This boy had silver skin, red
eyes and, strangest of all, a large, thin, flicking...
This boy had silver skin, red eyes and, strangest of all, a large,
thin, flicking head light. Then next second an ice-cream truck went right
through the boy and stopped. Two big black men chucked him inside the van after
everything turned black. When he awoke he was in a....
When he awoke he was in a pitch black room with ample
fingers on his shoulder. A bright flickering red light became visible and so
did the men. The men looked...
The men looked big, bold and vicious. The men carried him to
a large white room. In that room he couldn’t see anyone but he heard someone
say...
“HO, HO, HO, Merry Christmas. I’m Santa. Sorry about my ample helpers,
sometimes they go a bit over the top, if you know what I mean.” Then he heard a crying noise and it was...
Then he heard a crying noise it was the strange boy who he
meet on the street before he was an elf "oh sorry for bumping into you
before. I wanted to know if you will be
an elf with me," he asked.
I replied, "OK but only on one condition, my friends
Bri, Ranger, Ella, Gabby and Millie can work with me."
"sure, oh I’m
sorry I forgot to tell you the company’s name is Cocododledo Toy Company and my
name is Mr Griffen," he said. So
they all lived happily ever after working with Mr Griffen.
